[1]

Pat 7/17/12 12:44 PM

“fortunate to be”

 [2]

Pat 7/17/12 12:46 PM

delete?

 [3]

Pat 7/17/12 12:48 PM

delete

 [4]

Pat 7/17/12 12:50 PM

The water is shallower here close to shore.  Or delete.

 [5]

Pat 7/17/12 12:51 PM

Remove parentheses

 [6]

Pat 7/17/12 12:53 PM

But I can’t face the…..